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Vincent Mazzotta's avatar

Can’t wait to read the next chapter

Paula Stone's avatar

I wasn’t planning on doing a second chapter but I might do a series based on this story.

Vincent Mazzotta's avatar

I would really enjoy that

Mike's avatar

Very enticing wanted it to continue

ChocolateBob's avatar

Once again I crave more of your writing! More family fun. Step brother step mother step it up make me want even more I know you have it in you let it out ...... feed my desires!

Paula Stone's avatar

I do have a story in mind but I am so back logged in my writing I have a hard time getting to all my ideas.

thank you for those amazing words

ChocolateBob's avatar

I could cosume one giant disjointed fuck fest fantasy from the depths of your carnal thoughts. When you write I read when you push my buttons I consume! Make me consume you top to bottom from your toes to your ears with stops along the way wondrous passionate stops!

Gregory Kolster's avatar

Paula this was an absolutely an amazing story that you have written. I really enjoyed all the different characters especially Victoria. Sounds like my kind of lady that I could have fun with. Thank you my dear for doing such a great job with it and you know I always can't wait for you to write something to you. Much love my dear and thanks for sharing your beautiful writings with us. Also I'm going to share this on other social medias so hopefully it'll bring you more readers.